DOWN IN THE SWAMP
373 words, plus illustrated glossary of terms
The dummy for this work is in progress.
PITCH:
An early spring canoe trip for a father and daughter carries readers through the beauty and mystery of the American South’s low country.
COMP TITLES:
Over and Under The Pond (Kate Messner, Christopher Silas Neal, 2017)
The Hike (Alison Farrell, 2019)
Owl Moon (Jane Yolen and John Schoenherr, 1988)
MANUSCRIPT: The dummy for this book is in progress.
DOWN IN THE SWAMP - 373 words
(1)
Title Page
(2/3)
Copyright/Dedication
(4/5)
High up on the hill,
a warm wind blows through the pines
as morning awakes.
Up in the branches,
birds twitter, squirrels chatter
and race through the trees,
(6/7)
As Daddy and I
tiptoe quietly away
with paddles in hand:
Down the garden path,
past daisies and sunflowers
so recently fed;
(8/9)
Down to the swamp, where
a cool breath meanders through
the ancient cypress.
Pinpoints of soft light
glisten and sparkle
through the treetop canopy.
(10/11)
Swish, swish, the paddles
weave us through the cypress knees,
down the dark river.
We watch. We listen...
carried along by the swell
of April showers.
(12/13)
From the low, low banks,
tupelo and gallberry
sweeten the spring air
As curtains of moss
fall gently to the water
from towering oaks.
(14/15)
A soft gentle splash
tells us we are not alone.
The swamp is alive.
Alligators creep
through the dark muck of a slough,
all eyes and nostrils.
(16/17)
Orb weavers spin luminous webs
that stretch from branch to branch,
joining vine to vine,
As bullfrogs,
singing their last evening melody,
settle down to sleep.
(18/19)
Then the air is still,
calm, quiet, chill -
like the swamp is holding its breath.
Far in the distance,
the call of a whippoorwill
breaks the deep silence.
(20/21)
Then, all around us,
The clear music of the swamp
A unique cadence
The air itself sings,
Softly, and with a rhythm
Only the swamp knows
(22/23)
From high in an oak,
in a wise, wondering voice,
the swamp asks, Who? Who?
But no answer comes,
and the swamp is still again -
mostly still again.
(24/25)
Slowly, the music returns.
This time, I think, it’s for us -
a song of welcome.
Around a corner,
I see through the low branches
that we have arrived.
(26/27)
There, in a clearing,
made only by Daddy's hands,
a small cabin sits,
As if it has spent
this spring morning in waiting
for Daddy and me,
(28/29)
Knowing we would come.
It seems a part of these woods,
willing us to stay.
Soon, we will go back,
up to our home in the sun,
my daddy and me;
(30/31)
But not yet - not yet.
Time has only just begun,
here, down in the swamp.
(32 - fold out)
Illustrated glossary of swamp terms and animals:
Slough
Bald Cypress tree
Cypress knee
Live Oak
Gallberry tree
Tupelo tree
Pitcher plant
Spanish moss
Whippoorwill
Alligator
Bullfrog
Barred owl
Sandhill crane
Great blue heron
Golden-silk orb weaver spider
Water moccasin
Black rat snake
Corn snake
Copperhead snake
Snapping turtle/alligator snapping turtle
Cooter (turtle)
Yellow-bellied slider (turtle)
River otter
Raccoon
Bobcat
Red fox
White-tail deer